It´s just my opinion,but you should have an eye on the anatomy,but i like the idea of a pocky mascot very much^^and the impact is good. The hair could have had more volume(maybe you´ve draw a few single strains) and more lighting effect.The shading of her dress isn´t so bad,but it looks a little bit deformed because of her body.A tip of mine practise anatomy,i know it´s very hard and will take time,but in the end it will be remunerate <3 Maybe i have taken another background instead of the logo.
For all the effort you put into making her cute, the line work isn't very clean, which makes her look frumpy. I think you've done quite well but perhaps use the Pen Tool in PS for line work, or if this was free hand, make single, expressive lines rather than short scooting lines Makes me want some Poke though, so mission accomplished
Laughing-KitsuneFeatured By OwnerDec 5, 2012Hobbyist Photographer
Damn, you get awesome projects! I had two different Photography projects because almost everyone else wanted to do photography for their FMP. No fair. But...this is pretty damn awesome I love the hair!!!!!!!!